Well I worked out how to mostly avoid the cunudrum of he said /she said, mostly due to post on site by Kenneth Bear on about.com
I had found stuff on sentence deconstruction and thought this was algebra for writing.
I found those article had al I was looking for.. It made me wonder though how some learned academics think, very linear I suspect.
Any ways made some good progress today on this partial rewrite and very happy with how it is going. The story is getting much better thatn I have posted to date and heaps more relevant detail is growing there have also added more character depth in profiles.
That's it for tonight
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